敕勒 chi4 le4: an ancient nationality in the Chinese North
敕勒川,阴山下,
天似穹庐,笼盖四野。
天苍苍,野茫茫,
风吹草低见牛羊。
Imperial orders: force the ford, overcast mountains,
the vault of heaven like a yurt, a cage covering the four corners of the earth.
The sky is grey, the fields vast
The wind blows on the grass gazing cattle and sheep
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敕勒 is also a modern transliteration for the country Chile. Rather than allude to that country or China's nationalities I wanted to retain the idea expressed in Whitman's "Cavalry Crossing a Ford". To me, this poem describes a military expedition, whether an invasion, retaliation, or defense. Chinese is at times an enigmatic language. I also wished to keep the idea of the imperial system compelling and compelled to cold and grey war after war. Might be nice to avoid all that.
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